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Neel Paul - DENIED

Posted: Fri Jul 31, 2020 5:53 pm
by Neel Paul

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THE POLICE ACADEMY OF THE SAN ANDREAS POLICE DEPARTMENT
CHIEF OF POLICE STOCK SMITH


1. PERSONAL INFORMATION [IC]
A. First Name: Neel
B. Surname: Paul
C. Age: 22
D. Residence: Los Santos
E. Origin: El corona
F. Passport: Yes
G. Driving License: Yes
H. Weapon License: Yes

1.1. PERSONAL INFORMATION [OOC]
A. Age: 19
B. Discord: N.V.G#5385
C. Are you able to speak and/or listen on voice?: Yes
D. Your previous names: Saiyam Jain

2. EXPERIENCE AND BACKGROUND
A. Have you ever worked in a government agency (such as PD, FD, EMS)?
PD

B. What groups have you been, or still are, apart of?
I am in PD group.

C. What is the highest rank you achieved in a group, and which group?
Group- PD Rank- Volunteer

D. Have you ever been involved in criminal activities, if yes, which?
Yes,I am not saying this i dont do crime, i do ATM robbery,speeding,recklessness. ATM robbery only 1 time

E. Name at least three of your friends:
I dont have friend

F. Have you ever been convicted in the court of law?
No

3. MOTIVATION
A. Why do you want to join the San Andreas Police Department? [100 WORDS MINIMUM]
A. Why do you want to join the San Andreas Police Department? [100 WORDS MINIMUM]
I do only one big crime crime in ATM ROBBERY I just try,i dont like crime and i really wish i join police. I like police job . I do everything to join police department. I want to remove all crime in world . I like to help people its is a small part of police to help people. I like high rank officer because high rank officer is so nice to people and help them . I like investigate crime and solve them. I am talk with people so nice and i see so many police to talk like mean and abuse criminal i don't like those police i like nice police . I treat well if i become a police . i am volunteer but i treat people nice not like that i leave criminal. IF i denied in application i like also work as volunteer

B. What does it mean to you to be a law enforcement officer?
It mean do good work every day and remove crime Dont brake law,you can brake law in case of criminal if criminal do crime and you too far away you can do speeding for go fast. Use your power correct dont use your power wethout any reason

C. What are three negative aspects of your personality?
Bad in shooting sometime

D. How would you describe yourself?
Hi i am officer Neel for pd, i want to remove crime, I like pd job

E. What is your goal in SAPD if you get the chance to join?
My goal to remove all crime and use my power good way

4. EMPLOYMENT CONTRACT - LINK
I, Neel Paul, agree to the terms of the contract, to its sections and to the lawbook of San Andreas.
I agree to ensure their faithful observance, to defend the citizens and obey lawful orders issued by superiors.
I agree to protect the rights and liberties of San Andreas.

Re: neel paul

Posted: Fri Jul 31, 2020 10:48 pm
by Sam Woods
On a scale of 1 to 10, how much would you rate your English speaking skills?

Re: neel paul

Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2020 10:21 am
by Neel Paul
English speaking skills rate - 1% i Know my English is bad sorry :( Sorry for my English

Re: neel paul

Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2020 10:27 am
by Neel Paul
Sam Woods wrote:
Fri Jul 31, 2020 10:48 pm
On a scale of 1 to 10, how much would you rate your English speaking skills?
I give rating for my English 1%, I know my English bad sorry

Re: neel paul - PENDING

Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2020 12:40 pm
by Aberama McCavern

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THE POLICE ACADEMY OF SAN ANDREAS POLICE DEPARTMENT
CHIEF OF POLICE STOCK SMITH


Dear applicant,
We have detected some mistakes in your application and have set its status to pending.

The mistakes are:
  • Your forum name should match your in-game name, without the underscore between, for example: Aberama McCavern, and not Aberama_McCavern.
  • Fix your name in section 1.1 and sign the employment contract with your proper name.
  • Use a capital letter when typing your first name and surname in the forum & in-game & in the application( for example, Aberama McCavern and not aberama mccavern ).
  • Fill section 2.3 properly. (and which group)
We expect the application to be fixed in 48 hours, otherwise it will be denied.
Signed,
Aberama McCavern
Senior Instructor


Re: neel paul - PENDING

Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2020 1:47 pm
by Neel Paul
fix

Re: neel paul - PENDING

Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2020 5:15 pm
by Neel Paul
Aberama McCavern wrote:
Sat Aug 01, 2020 12:40 pm

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THE POLICE ACADEMY OF SAN ANDREAS POLICE DEPARTMENT
CHIEF OF POLICE STOCK SMITH


Dear applicant,
We have detected some mistakes in your application and have set its status to pending.

The mistakes are:
  • Your forum name should match your in-game name, without the underscore between, for example: Aberama McCavern, and not Aberama_McCavern.
  • Fix your name in section 1.1 and sign the employment contract with your proper name.
  • Use a capital letter when typing your first name and surname in the forum & in-game & in the application( for example, Aberama McCavern and not aberama mccavern ).
  • Fill section 2.3 properly. (and which group)
We expect the application to be fixed in 48 hours, otherwise it will be denied.
Signed,
Aberama McCavern
Senior Instructor

I solve this mistake,Sorry for mistake

Re: Neel Paul - PENDING

Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2020 7:00 pm
by Aberama McCavern
There are some points that are not fixed yet, such as:

-Your forum name should match your in-game name, without the underscore between, for example: Aberama McCavern, and not Aberama_McCavern.

Follow these steps for directions on how to change your forum name:
1)Click on your name on the top of your screen.
2)Click on the ”Profile” option.
3)Click on the ”Edit Profile” option next to your username.
4)Click on the ”Edit account settings” option.
5)Fix your username.
6)on bottom of the screen write your current password under the ”current password tab” to allow you to submit the changes you have made.
7)Click Submit.

-Sign the employment contract with your proper name.

We expect the application to be fixed in 40 hours, otherwise it will be denied.

Re: Neel Paul - PENDING

Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2020 7:32 pm
by Neel Paul
Aberama McCavern wrote:
Sat Aug 01, 2020 7:00 pm
There are some points that are not fixed yet, such as:

-Your forum name should match your in-game name, without the underscore between, for example: Aberama McCavern, and not Aberama_McCavern.

Follow these steps for directions on how to change your forum name:
1)Click on your name on the top of your screen.
2)Click on the ”Profile” option.
3)Click on the ”Edit Profile” option next to your username.
4)Click on the ”Edit account settings” option.
5)Fix your username.
6)on bottom of the screen write your current password under the ”current password tab” to allow you to submit the changes you have made.
7)Click Submit.

-Sign the employment contract with your proper name.

We expect the application to be fixed in 40 hours, otherwise it will be denied.
I fix it

Re: Neel Paul - PENDING

Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2020 7:39 pm
by Aberama McCavern
I would appreciate it if you could read all of the mistakes I have listed.
You still didn't sign the employment contract ( Section 4) with your proper name.